Thursday, June 19, 2014

Bloated Epics: A Belated Review of "The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug"

Only one word that comes to mind as I think about the movie “The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug”. It is this: bloated. This movie is the second part of the trilogy that has been crafted out of the prequel to the Lord of the Rings trilogy, and it was written and directed by Peter F. Jackson, and released in 2013. It is based on the novel by J.R.R. Tolkein, The Hobbit, but while the original was a rather slim tome that introduced the reader in a light-hearted and charming way to Middle Earth, a place populated by goblins, by elves, by wizards and dwarves, this movie transforms the material and weighs it down with a baggage that it all darkness and non-stop action, stripping it of the airy bits and most of the whimsy of the original source material. It can only be described as a movie transformed by a Hollywood spell to fashion yet another box-office hit, relying as it does on the same old formulas that, because they are no longer novel, having been used with the Lord of the Rings trilogy, strike one as exhausting. It is as if the Hobbit were to carry around the burden of the subsequent trilogy, expanded as it is in scope and utterly changed as it is in tone.

Which is not to say that in the original Tolkein novel there were no elements of darkness. There were, and we had madcap pursuits and moments of bewilderment and terror. But overall it had a lightheartedness that was charming, with a narrator who frequently spoke to the reader in asides, making practical observations that were meant to ground the whole in whimsy. We never for a moment thought that any of the band of 14 would suffer serious harm, even though we could at times catch glimpses of a disguised commentary on the political situation in Europe at the time. We had only to take note that the novel was written in the 1930s, during the age of fascist dictators, and that the work is pervaded by a sort of worldview that emphasizes the value of the west, a land of civilization and progress, in contrast to the east, the region that the band penetrate in their attempt to reclaim Thorin’s kingdom. We see it in the description of the Wood Elves, who

“….differed from the High Elves of the West, and were more dangerous and less wise. For most of them (together with their scattered relations in the hills and mountains) were descended from the ancient tribes that never went to Faerie in the West. There the Light-elves and the Deep-elves and the Sea-elves went and lived for ages, and grew fairer and wiser and more learned, and invented their magic and their cunning craft in the making of beautiful and marvelous things, before come came back into the Wide World.”


Given the undercurrent of criticism directed at the kings who lived in the east, such as the Dwarf king who unwisely plundered a mountain, or the menace of the East, the disembodied spirit of Sauron, one can’t help but see in them a premonition of war.  But this came later, and did not color or dominate the whole novel the way it does in this Jackson movie adaptation, where apparently somberness of tone is necessary to achieve the sense of scale that is equated with grandeur and wonder, something which wasn’t really the case in the movie, which was more of a caper, frequently emphasizing comic notes in the charming interaction of this band of adventurers.


Here, what we have in this second movie trilogy is a story unto which has been grafted the epic scale of the trilogy that was to come, The Lord of the Rings.  The adventures described now have an epic quality, and there is a mood of seriousness, a heightening of dramatic impact, a banging as it were on the heavy drums where before we had the lightness of a charming fable told amidst the high-pitched notes of a reed flute. The movie accentuates the bombast, with plenty of brooding characters, and with a scale that doesn’t match the intimacy of what was evident in the original material. We have somber counselors, and a dwarfish Lothario who seems to fall for an Elvish maid, and a misguided Elvish king who has no compunction about torturing orcs or sneering at other races. And we have the familiar brand of villains, the anonymous hordes of orcs and goblins and evil spirits, who are always vowing to kill to the accompaniment of swirling dark music. They sneer and grimace and threaten in this accentuation of the one note of menace, while in the original novel at least the monsters (such as the trolls or the wood spiders) are seen to converse and joke amongst themselves as any old hunter might be at the capture of their prey. They have been simplified in this movie adaptation, in other words.


It seems to me that the Hobbit was not meant to assume such epic garb. It always struck me as a story to be read by a kindly old grandfather to a child on cold winter nights, a story with a lightness of character that was also, perhaps, edifying, in a way that was common for modern day fairy tales and not the brutal and scary way of old European folktales. What is fantasy but a travelogue through a metaphorical dream landscape, one that isn’t too unsettling or unrecognizable but, instead, upholds a certain comfortable moral framework? Innocent and long-suffering youth prevails, with the help of magical aides or their own luck, and their oppressors are punished suitably in a reaffirmation of our beliefs.  


Peter Jackson’s Lord of the Rings adaptation was acclaimed by fans as true to the spirit of the original, and his storytelling was vigorous, matching the more somber note of the literary work while highlighting those deeply-felt and innocent personal notes that provided such an effective contrast in scale between the endless succession of battles (army after army of orcs and eastern hordes besieging the fair westerners) and the personal struggles of Frodo and Samwise as they trekked into Mordor on an impossible quest.This emotional resonance was not overpowered by the scale, but majestic and sweeping vistas were complemented by the personal interactions, and Peter Jackson captured them effectively in his movie trilogy. But it seems to be next to impossible to weave the same spell more than once.


One couldn’t help but be bewildered and also disappointed by the incorporation of so much filler material that has been written by Jackson and his fellow co-writers to “flesh out” this epic. We have now storylines that take liberties and transform the original work beyond all recognition, refashioning and stuffing it so that it becomes an exercise in excess. For example, we see it in the episode with Beorn, the man-bear who lives out in the wild.

As portrayed in the movie, he has become another sulking survivor, the last of a dying breed, who doesn’t smile and seems tortured by his past. He is first seen in bear form, pursuing Gandalf and the adventurers as they flee, and is at the point of snapping his jaws on them if not for a fortuitous burst of speed. It is menace that is accentuated, and this menace continues when he assumes human form and reluctantly agrees to help them. But this wasn’t the Beorn that I remembered from the book.


As I thought about it, I came to the realization that almost all the male figures in this movie fit into the mold of tortured and sulking individuals, broadcasting their self-involvement in a stylistic exercise that is repeated over and over in modern culture and the romantic elevation of the misfit and the loner. They don’t seem to laugh, they are always brooding, always making plans for revenge, always on the defensive, always with the metaphorical wall drawn up, and with none of the openness I remember from the novel. Here is his first appearance in the novel:


“Ugh! Here they are!” he said to the horses. “They don’t look dangerous. You can be off!” He laughed a great rolling laugh, put down his axe and came forward. “


He laughs, he chats with the dwarves and the wizard, he seems amiable beneath a gruff exterior. In the movie, he scowls and stars and never laughs, and he only agrees to help them because he despises them less than he despises the orcs that are hunting them. And except for Bilbo and Gandalf, all the other male leads seem to share in varying degrees with these qualities. From Beorn to Thorin to the Elf King to Legolas to the Smuggler of Lake Town, they all come from the same mold: embittered men who engage in an excess of Sturm and Drang. They are outsiders, they have been wronged and they are single minded in their relentless emoting of their anger.


The pacing of this movie also seems wrong, and draws much from Jackson’s first movie trilogy. We have peril succeeding peril in a nonstop sequence, where each escape seems more unlikely than the former, but in action sequences that are drawn out, long and frequently exhausting. The pacing is relentless, and it numbs the mind with its repetition. We see it over and over: encounters with trolls, with goblins, with orcs, with Beorn, with elves, with humans, and with the dragon Smaug. Orcs head are parted from their bodies with singular ease, as if they weren’t hardened warriors, and were instead what they are: expendable elements in a monotonous narrative sequence. We saw it in the first movie from this trilogy, and we see it over and over in this movie, a pacing that seems to be very much in line with a Hollywood action movie formulas that are calculated to appeal to adolescent male audiences, where the meal that is the movie consists not of a sequence of subtly varying courses that complement each other, but is instead a buffet of adrenaline spiced action. It is fast food for the masses, all fat and salt but with little nutritional value.


Now, in the literary source, the elves were portrayed as fey creatures, ones who had an otherworldly edge to them but who were also characterized by having a certain quality of whimsy or, if one could express it with another word, a joyous humor. In the book they are chanting fey songs, and while the lyrics were not epic poetry, they did at least suggest another side to the elves:


“Hmmm! It smells like elves!”, thought Bilbo, and he looked up at the stars. They were burning bright and blue. Just then there came a burst of song like laughter in the trees:

O! What are you doing,
And where are you going?
Your ponies need shoeing!
The river is flowing!
O! tra-la-la-lally
Here down in the valley!


Which is quite a contrast with the elves in the movie, who are all menace and pent-up energy waiting to be unleashed. How easily the elves slay orcs, without any moral compunction! Elves such as Legolas and the female Elvish warrior perform impossible physical leaps, changing direction in midair in the best tradition of Hong Kong kung-fu epics, as if they are weightless, while also able strangely enough to perform herculean feats of strength. They fight without getting tired, they never miss when they shoot their weapons, they have the visual acuity of the Hubble telescope and they can meld into the background instantaneously. And did I mention that they have no compunction about killing and torturing orcs? Where is the innocence of these elves?


They are, of course, a nightmare vision of the superman, the superior race that can kill without compunction, and who can have any compassion for orcs when they are so manifestly ugly and deformed and stunted and hardly even look like anorexic runway models the way the elves do? To hark back to the example of high school, they definitely occupy the haughty upper echelons, so self-centered, so casual in their dismissal of the lower classes, able to preen and maybe even a touch arrogant. They are not like the elves described in Tolkein’s novel, I must repeat. These elves are hard to admire, and if called upon to sum them up in a telling phrase, I would call them the stormtroopers for the west, a dark fantasy of power.


There are notes of melodrama in this adaptation by Jackson. They remind me of what I saw in Dickens or in Balzac, with characters who are scrambling in a new social and economic order, where if the realist novel of the 19th century involved an incorporation of the conflicts of social class and the ascension of the bourgeoisie into literature, we have now a more disguised version of this same story, where the dwarves are the working classes on the move, and the elites are groups who have their own enduring cultural capital, able to set the aspirational norms for the others, the perfect taste, the perfect fashion, the perfect manners (even if underneath they are all menace), while the orcs are little more than slaves, the endless supply of soldiers and warriors or colonial subjects. Is it any wonder then that they resist this colonial order? Is not Sauron the Spartacus of Middle Earth?


The wonder quotient was also severely lacking in this film. It was present in the first Lord of the Rings, in the innocence for example of the country fair where the hobbits were allowed to roam and enjoy an honest evening, with hobbits involved in innocent shenanigans that provided a moment of respite from the serious and somber overtones of the latter half of the work. Here, everything seems so much heavier, a continual clanking noise where the lighter notes are absent. The visual landscapes are beautiful, painterly in their scope and impact, but they accentuate the note of artificial excess. They remind me of Disneyland and the concept of simulacrums. They are so purified that they seem to bear little relation to the actual thing, and have become entities in themselves, imaginary landscapes that just don’t seem to satisfy us because they are too pretty, they are too magnificent, they are too much.


One is left anticipating, of course, the point of culmination in this film, that of the encounter with Smaug. The encounter rings hallow, not for the sequence in which the Hobbit and the dragon engage in verbal foreplay, but because of what comes after:  another bloated action sequence.



The Smaug of the movie has all the bad habits of B-level movie villains, namely, he loves to blather too much.  This recurring motif, of course, is a device that is meant to prolong suspense in order to provide an opening for the eventual release of these pent-up energies. When we postpone the moment of confrontation, but without diminishing or resolving the element of danger, we have suspense, but one can’t help but think, over and over, that Smaug must surely be too clever for that plot-worn device. It is, nonetheless, refreshing in the book, a sequence to be savored, for it highlights what is improbable, but invests it with charm.  Bilbo the reluctant thief is engaging in the only form of combat he can hope to engage in when confronting a massive and dangerous dragon: verbal wordplay. We relish this turning of the scales (pun intended) as the underdog, an undersized and reluctant hero, confronts the despoiler of the kingdom of the Dwarves, the killer of legions, a dragon who for all his might is rather silly. This sequence is narrated with charm, but in the movie, we have another extended action sequence in which Bilbo struggles to get away, and in which he and the band of dwarves are involved in a Rubik’s cube sequence in which they try (unsuccessfully)to kill the dragon. One misses the narrative pleasure of the book that need not linger in such detail on these sequences.


The film ends with a cliffhanger. Gandalf is in peril, for he has been captured by the shadow, the prefiguration of Sauron. The dwarves are in the mountain, having made another miraculous escape, while Smaug bursts out and is flying like a malevolent bullet train with no brakes to smash into the small port village (Lake Town) where another hero, the smuggler, awaits to kill him with the last arrow at his disposal.  


We know what will happen. It will be drawn out, and filled with overwrought elements, and be paced in accordance with the needs and expectations of an adolescent audience that has been raised on a steady diet of vapid superhero movies and hyper-violent videogames. It will be another bloated spectacle filled with the air of inevitability, ready yet to shatter another beloved work from my childhood. 

Copyright 2014 (C) Oscar G. Romero

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